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My friend, I know that times are tough
And it seems that things are very hard for you
But I want to let you know that I care for you
And I don't want you to quit.

I understand that you are suffering
And things just seem so desperate and unfortunate for you
But I want you to know that even as things begin to look bleak
I will always be here for you.

This world is far from perfect
And we both realize that
And even though we're apart
We're still connected here in our hearts.

This world may be a very dark place
Full of pain and strife
But together the two of us
Can stand out and shine a brilliant light in the darkness.

I know that what you're going through
Is very tough and very painful
But know that you do not
Have to travel this path alone.

Because there is one thing
That I want you to know.
That I shall not stand down
And that I shall never quit aiding you.

No matter what happens
No matter what sort of pain may befall us
Know that I shall never quit.
That I shall never surrender.

Never give in to despair
Never give in to the hatred
Even as everything seems to be turned against you
I shall help you through the hard times.

I shall be your shield.
I will be your protector.
And so do the friends that you have made
Over the time you have known them.

Even as things begin to look dark
I will be there for you.
I will be your shoulder to cry on
When the pain becomes too much.

I say this with confidence
And I know you can find yours.
I just want to let you know.....

I will never give up.
This is a very heartfelt piece I wrote to a friend of mine (you know who you are.) I want to let you know that I will be your friend; if you need a shoulder to cry on, I will be here for you.

I want to let you know that I won't quit helping you through the tough times. That I will not bail out on you. Things get better; that's a fact of life. And I want to let you know that.

This story belongs to me.

Faves and comments are greatly appreciated.

Share this with friends. I think they'd be happy to see this.
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
"It either fight, or we fall, be we will give it our all" -Jacob Cross-
Nice Poem, I like it :)
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! My main character stories are also a nice read as well.
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
I have a look at them when I have time. :)
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student Writer
Okay.
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ken007008 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Student Writer
i wished i had said something similar to this earlier to a friend of mine that i cared a lot about too... but it's now too late, as she's on the other side of the globe
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Student Writer
I see. My condolences.
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Merikuu Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful... Your friend is really lucky.
I've been really depressed for a while now, and my best friend knows about it. She just doesn't seem to care! She's really nice to me and we're still good friends, but everytime I try to talk about how I feel, she quickly changes the subject looking very akward.
Sorry for my whining. Point was, that this is very beautiful!
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much, friend.
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SilverishStar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Absolutely.. beautifully written! ^^
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much! Share this with friends, and encourage them to comment, please!
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SilverishStar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Student General Artist
I'll give it my best shot!
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks.
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Hinatafangirl22 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
why the fuck isn't this published into a mini novel un?
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Student Writer
Heh, who knows? Thanks for the feedback. Check out "The Scheming Mastermind," too.
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
Very uplifting and heartfelt poetry :) Your friend is very lucky to have you ^^ Great job!
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much. I'm just trying to help her any way I can from my comp.
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
Thats really nice of you :) I bet she really appreciates it :)
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Writer
^^ I do what I can. And yeah, she did appreciate it.
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
Thats great :D
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Writer
^^
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
^^
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Writer
^^
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SilverishStar Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Student General Artist
Beautiful.. absolutely beautiful. It's so ful off emotion, and it's written awesomely well! great job! =D
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much!!
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SilverishStar Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student General Artist
No problem! ^^
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Writer
^^
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InsanityStories Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
This is very heart-warming. She is lucky to have you as a friend.
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much. She's going through school now, and she needs all the support she can get.
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InsanityStories Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
I can believe that.
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
:nod:
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RyouLuver2000 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Digital Artist
*doesn't even know what to say*
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
I don't quit, and neither should you.
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RyouLuver2000 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Digital Artist
...
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
I want to be there for you when times get tough, Kiana. Okay? If you ever feel down, think of me and all the times I stood up for you.
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RyouLuver2000 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you...
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
You are far more than welcome.
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RyouLuver2000 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Digital Artist
*hugs*
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
:hug: I will never let you down....
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Filmographer
This is really beautiful, emotional and best of all is dedicated to some dear friend of yours :):):):)
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you for the kind words.
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Filmographer
Your welcome :):):)
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
^^
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Filmographer
:) ^^ :)
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
:la: ^^ :la:
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Filmographer
:la::woohoo: ^^ :woohoo::la:
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
^^
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Madame-Finitevus1890 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011
This is so beautiful....I love it....:happycry:

Your friend is lucky- I wish someone had said something like this to me when I was down...
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks. I really appreciate it.

:hug:
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Madame-Finitevus1890 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
You're more than welcome. :hug:
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
^^
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