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I Will Love You Until The End of Eternity

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You are the star that shines brightest in my heart....
The spark that sets alight the fires of love I feel for you.

You are the woman I couldn't bear to be without.

I just want you to know....
Oh man, this makes me sound a bit corny....

I love you.  I love you so much....

I can't stand to live without you.....

I need you.



I will do whatever it takes
To make sure you never live one single day
Feeling empty and lonely without me.

I, too,
Will be your shining star
Your friend forever
Your one true love.

Dawn....

I will love you until the end of eternity.

And that you can count on.
I wrote this poem from Hyper's perspective. I really do love this couple; the characters created by two people who obviously love each other so much. Now I've never been in a relationship (I've come close, but never took my chance), but I can totally understand these two care a lot for each other.

But I wanted to write this from my own personal perspective; y'see, I'm afraid to love. I'm truly afraid of the consequences, and my increasing knowledge over time has not helped to ease the pain. I want to show whoever my soulmate is that I will never hurt her...or him if it comes to that. We're all flawed, true, but it's up to ourselves and the people we call our friends to help us through those flaws and improve upon them. However, no matter how much we smooth each curve, or cement each crack in the ground, the flaws will continue to appear. And I......well, I am certainly far from flawless, as are we all.

What can I say? I guess I'm a sucker for love. So what does that make me, a romantic?

Hyper belongs to :iconhyperbolt13:.
Dawn belongs to :icondawnvalentine101: (You'd best get better, woman. I'd like you to see this poem.)
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booglybear's avatar
Awesome story! It's pretty cool and nice!